as I turn and walk away a cold wind
sends chills over my weakened body
while light from a lemon wedge of moon
makes its way through our shattered panes
like a candle burning from both ends
faint light upon a row of photographs
showing sleeping segments of our lives
it seems everyone is hating someone
I utter to no one that I am starving
I tread quietly away on shattered ground
I like this a lot! The theme of segments is strong throughout, from the lemon wedge to the photographs to even the hatred that separates people, then finally the ground. Very strong!
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Thanks…I was hoping that lemon wedge would help bring out the bitterness I was trying to convey…:)
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Delightful images…especially ‘taken’ with ‘Lemon wedge of moon…’ Great!
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Thanks! I was hoping someone would pick up on that. A wedge of lemon will leave a bitter/sour taste much as some thoughts can do…
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